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Other Submissions by Elobo
Author   |
Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 6 |
SunshineForest - #07
There are a few wordy pages in this books, ie: betwixt. I firmly believe that the audience shouldn't be patronized. Kids should ask questions about stories regardless, so some vocabulary thrown into the mix can't hurt. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 7 |
SunshineForest - #08
Here's that focal mechanism again. The sun is important to this story, it often sets an unstated mood. But look in the background, a kid will make the connection between it being there now, and somewhere else on a later page. It marks that arrow lizard as something Bushie will interact with. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 8 |
SunshineForest - #09
I've waited until this page to talk about environment malleability. The art style allows me to bend the world to the story's emotional whim. It is subtle, but it gives me that freedom. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 9 |
SunshineForest - #10
Here's the payoff from Page 7. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 11 |
SunshineForest - #12
Here's a new character, his demeanor should be an offset from the rest of the scene. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
