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| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 3 |
earthfelt2 - #03
Page 15: they're forced out of the house with psi transport omega, when starman XXM attacks, and their mom's arm turns into a... laser cannon? |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 4 |
earthfelt2 - #04
Page 16: Their house explodes in a fiery inferno!!! |
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| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 5 |
earthfelt2 - #05
Page 17: Before Nina starts a crying fit, the mechanism attaches to Terry's wrist (unintentional Ben 10 reference) and their mom starts to tell them all they need to know. |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 6 |
earthfelt2 - #06
Page 18: a couple of errors, Jeff isn't the only one dead, he's the only one alive, The descendants are of the different 8 kids not just Paula and Ness. Originally, Ness was the grandfather, but the year scheme didn't fit. And one other thing, the Giygas resurrection program!!? That's disturbing(and an idea for a spin off...) |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 7 |
earthfelt2 - #07
Page 19: Terry tries to comfort his shattered sister, taking it better than she does. |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
