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| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 7 |
earthfelt2 - #07
Page 19: Terry tries to comfort his shattered sister, taking it better than she does. |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 6 |
earthfelt2 - #06
Page 18: a couple of errors, Jeff isn't the only one dead, he's the only one alive, The descendants are of the different 8 kids not just Paula and Ness. Originally, Ness was the grandfather, but the year scheme didn't fit. And one other thing, the Giygas resurrection program!!? That's disturbing(and an idea for a spin off...) |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 52 |
earthfelt2 - #52
Page 64: End of Chapter 1. |
3/13/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 51 |
earthfelt2 - #51
Page 63: other than the little brother quip, this page is completely serious. do not laugh. |
3/13/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 50 |
earthfelt2 - #50
Page 62: Sasa takes a happy attack and Terry gets defensive. Oh C'mon, you'd probably hug everyone in the room if you were in his situation, and (maybe) you'd feel awkward if your sister was given a friend hug by a boy. |
3/13/10 | 0.00 |
