kenisu - #70
I look back on this and wonder, why isn't Ninten getting as much use out of that bat as he can? Was I so absent-minded at the time I didn't even think to have him bash the crows, even though he's got the thing *right there in his hand*?

kenisu - #37
It wasn't until I started this page when I realized that the Tattered Bat Ninten's been carrying around is in his hand in some panels... and not there in others. The first time I screwed up was on the last page, when the door slams behind him and Minnie. And here in the first panel, I guessed he just must have... switched it to his left hand so that he could use his inhaler. Yeah.

kenisu - #73
Much as I wanted to leave the backgrounds of panels 2 and 3 plain white, I caved and colored them in. As you can see.
And it's probably easy enough to guess, but the Hippie's prayer was originally "Ekke, ekke, ekke, ekke, p'tang, zoo-boing, zow zing". I'm not sure if I felt that Monty Python references are hardly even funny anymore now that everyone gets them, or if I felt too much like I was swiping the phrase in slimeball fashion, but either way, eventually I just invented my own chant for him.