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Prologue - Page 17: Town Anxiety - by kenisu3000

Prologue - Page 17: Town Anxiety




kenisu - #17
Ever since I finished EB Zero back in 2000, whenever I imagined George poring over his notes, I pictured him sitting at a scanty table in a dark, dank basement scene. It feels soooo nice to be able to put these long-time mental images on paper.
Also, I was originally going to color the mayor's over-vest red, but then when I looked at the next-to-last panel (where he's silencing Suzannah), I realized that I made him look awfully Russian, so instead, I colored his vest blue. And speaking of Suzannah, I think I may have made yet another historical oopsie here: back in those days, women had very few privileges, so what are several women doing at a TOWN COUNCIL MEETING? Of course, from the very beginning, I knew I wanted the characters to have some sort of audience with the mayor to discuss the situation with George, but originally it was supposed to be a small enclosed meeting with her, James, a FEW involved townsfolk, and the mayor; but eventually it evolved into a full-out town council meeting.
At any rate, I needed Suzannah present to be able to move the story forward. So I fudged a little.



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kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 75: The Devil Made Them Do it
kenisu - #75
It may not be how you get enemies to "snap out of it" in the game, but I suppose it's believable. They've had a chance to sleep on it!
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kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 74: Nighty-Night Freakshow
kenisu - #74
Ninten wasn't centered properly in the panel where he's sneaking past the crowd of snoozing foes, but I only noticed this after I had inked him in, so I "letterboxed" the panel. I guess it works better that way artistically, too...
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kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 73: Don't Insult My MOTHER
kenisu - #73
Much as I wanted to leave the backgrounds of panels 2 and 3 plain white, I caved and colored them in. As you can see.
And it's probably easy enough to guess, but the Hippie's prayer was originally "Ekke, ekke, ekke, ekke, p'tang, zoo-boing, zow zing". I'm not sure if I felt that Monty Python references are hardly even funny anymore now that everyone gets them, or if I felt too much like I was swiping the phrase in slimeball fashion, but either way, eventually I just invented my own chant for him.
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kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 72: Hippie, Be Good
kenisu - #72
You're just not a MOTHER fan if you're not hearing the Hippie theme music here.
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kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 71: When Evil Reared its Ugly Head...
kenisu - #71
Character development can be painful. It's actually starting to annoy *me* how much of a wuss Ninten is this early on.
Still, you try taking on that many foes by yourself, with nothing but a tattered old baseball bat...
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