Author   |
Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 70: Clash of the Bumpkins |
kenisu - #70
I look back on this and wonder, why isn't Ninten getting as much use out of that bat as he can? Was I so absent-minded at the time I didn't even think to have him bash the crows, even though he's got the thing *right there in his hand*? |
4/16/10 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 71: When Evil Reared its Ugly Head... |
kenisu - #71
Character development can be painful. It's actually starting to annoy *me* how much of a wuss Ninten is this early on. Still, you try taking on that many foes by yourself, with nothing but a tattered old baseball bat... |
4/16/10 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 1 - Page 37: Ninten Takes Responsibility |
kenisu - #37
It wasn't until I started this page when I realized that the Tattered Bat Ninten's been carrying around is in his hand in some panels... and not there in others. The first time I screwed up was on the last page, when the door slams behind him and Minnie. And here in the first panel, I guessed he just must have... switched it to his left hand so that he could use his inhaler. Yeah. |
5/27/07 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 72: Hippie, Be Good |
kenisu - #72
You're just not a MOTHER fan if you're not hearing the Hippie theme music here. |
4/16/10 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 73: Don't Insult My MOTHER |
kenisu - #73
Much as I wanted to leave the backgrounds of panels 2 and 3 plain white, I caved and colored them in. As you can see. And it's probably easy enough to guess, but the Hippie's prayer was originally "Ekke, ekke, ekke, ekke, p'tang, zoo-boing, zow zing". I'm not sure if I felt that Monty Python references are hardly even funny anymore now that everyone gets them, or if I felt too much like I was swiping the phrase in slimeball fashion, but either way, eventually I just invented my own chant for him. |
4/16/10 | 0.00 |
